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Sitting under shady trees
A breeze is blowing
Slightly.
Following your footsteps
And hearing your voice.
Darling,
I am closer than ever
They won't let me near
I love you I love you
But we fear more than fear.
:iconsoundtrack67:
These feelings I wear
Are the burdens I bear

I gotta love her
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:iconcesar-sama:
I believe that this poem portrays the impact of homophobia rather well.

Great job!! :D
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:iconsoundtrack67:
I was going for the theme of homophobia :)
Looks like I got it
thank you for commenting
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:iconviolet-minds:
~Violet-Minds Dec 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"But we fear more than fear."

Interesting.
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:iconsoundtrack67:
Yes, a bit intriguing
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*choco-latte-squirrel Dec 2, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Nice.
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*choco-latte-squirrel Dec 3, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome.
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